Age/Gender: 24, Male
Location: London
Job: DEATHWISH
www.deathwish.co.uk
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Good song, really creates that dark, tense atmosphere that you associate with ninjas. Now onto the technical stuff, really well balenced in terms of intruments and the only modification that i would suggest is to modify the second half of the song a bit more. After about a minute or so it starts to drag a bit. Other than that, great job 5/5 and faved.
Cheers,
WISK
Author's Response:
I don't really agree with your assessment in the fact that it drags in the second half. It winds down to a bridge section. Then explodes once more for the finale.. But to each his own.
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I can't believe how negleted this is. It is at this point i would offer constructive critisism but i am at a loss. A brilliant piece my friend can't wait for any others your going to release...
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot =D. I knew that this isn't a cup of tea for Newgrounders before I signed up, though, so... I didn't expect much.
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Good overall but needs a little variation in the centre and certainly needs tweaking on the start and end. The start is for too long i made it through but most people wont appreciate it and hit zero faster than you could say zero bomber. The end consists of 2 mins of silence which also needs changing. The middle is good but as i said could use variation. Sorry about all this i'm not so picky normally but i hate to see a good song go to waste because of a long intro which idiots can't listen to :)
Cheers,
WISK
Author's Response:
thanks ;) You are right of course... this is short version of the track, so the middle is little bit impoverished. At the end is one only one minute of silence, but I know what do you mean ;)
about haters, zerovoters and idiots... I know about them, I know how they are acting in case like this, but I don't give a **** ! I upload it there for people who have more brain cells that teeth...
thank you for reviewing this...
peace out
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Excellent job! The piano is melodic enough to make it listenable and clashes enough to make it scary. Really suits a dungeon setting and with a bit of work it could loop well on top. My only suggestion would be to make the cello part a little more complex as it doesn't help with the scary atmosphere that much. Well, whatever you do with it, good luck.
Cheers,
WISK
Author's Response:
Wow thank you very much ^^
I'll maybe work again on it (especially on the cello as you say) but that's not sure. :P
There's something strange about the loop of this music, after listening to it one time on the ng player it doesn't sound really cool, but after the second time, it's ok.
Well anyway, thanks fo the review! ^^
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I remember this.... Good job overall, a little forgettable but then again the original was aswell so your not at fault there. The only suggestion i have is to give that bass a little more punch as the melody overpowers it throughout the song. So there you are my two cents or pennies as is more appropriate for me :)
Cheers,
WISK
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Good song. Liked the snappy riff's around 1:30 and the over the top distortion throughout the entire song. My only suggestion is to make the bass a little more prominenent as the distortion seems to have made the whole thing a little treble heavy. Other than that, great job!
Author's Response:
thanks man
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Really great song you've got going on. Really enjoyed the build up between the trable and bass throughout the entire song, it brought the whole thing together very well. Other than that there is nothing, don't add, don't take away, you got it right first time here!
Cheers,
WISK
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I came across this after reviewing you most recent song 'plains of faith' and i was shocked to see it had zero reviews and fuck all votes. Like i said brilliant song you're a very talented artist and i shall be watching you from now on...
Cheers,
WISK
Author's Response:
Heh, thanks. I guess I'm not everyones cup of tea at Newgrounds, but I'm pretty good at shrugging off non-constructive critique so I'll manage. You'll probably see quite a bit of me (and my antifans will too ^^') since I'm in the middle of going through my old FL-songs and turning them into MP3s!
Tried checking out your site but the link was broken, BTW. =(
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Not much to say here so i'll keep it short. Brilliant song, i would change a thing to do with it i'll be keeping an eye out for your future releases!
Cheers,
WISK
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Good song with some good riffs under the singing. However the singing really overpowers the song, try making the intrumental more prominent and i reckon you'd have a better overall. Really liked the lyrics, they linked together well and sounded great with the guitar. If you realease a heavier version i'll be the first to download :)
Cheers,
WISK
Author's Response:
I think its funny that its not heavy enought, but its all good. I have been focusing on making vocals more prominate on all my work, but Im working on some heavy instrumental stuff so have to wait and see what you think of that.
Thanks for the input
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